Periodic Rain
I still remember the world from the eyes of a child looking out through the dirty glass of his window in his sky-blue castle.
That window is not dirty cuz birdies wanted to bless it with a random-shaped mark, and not cuz that lovely lady of the house didn’t rub it clean with the same hands that were caressing that child's hair to wake him up…
That window is dirty cuz of the mist that I didn’t recognize if it's from the inside or the outside… what do you expect I was a kido for god's sake.
Watching the world goes by as the rain drops falling everywhere embracing everyone.
A tousled-bearded long shadow wearing a tiara and looking up at the sky praising God for this blissful rain… wow that beard contains more water than a sponge … bless you Amen.
A beautiful lady with a long dress looking out from her balcony raising three fingers like she is counting the rain drops
A lil tiny girl cuddled in fur and heavy scarves is rolling down the street to be back home again and sit next to the warm heater and start sipping her mommy's hot lentil's soup... that's a yummy soup as I recall...
A well-dressed guy waves a greeting to a speeding car driver and the guy next to the drivers waves back with a grin
Two love birds walking with wet hair locks and God put a smile upon their faces while their eyes are shimmering with passion ...what do muddy pants have to do with love … still don’t get it!!
Whatever it means to you …. Know that everything goes in circles.
Looking out from the same window after twenty years… to see the same old people with different faces ...and of course different hairstyles
The long shadow bearded old man is looking up to check what's underneath the long dress of the beautiful lady on the balcony. The lady raising seven fingers calling " seven hundreds … what do you think ?? " the old gray-haired man in tiara screams " what!! That's expensive " … May rain wash our sins away Amen.
The tiny lil girl is rolling back home as well but what a home!! … What a pity!! … an empty home with a divorced parents and a brother in prison for moral impiety
The well dressed guy is splattered all over with mud by the speedy car … he is shouting his guts out with curses that really needs an interpreter to help you understand them… the young boy next to the driver manifests his head from the window and scream out " CHAOS "
Passionate eyes of love birds became lustful while the he is pulling the she into his web of sin in his empty apartment where there's no one but his tiny rolling sister that will come back from school soon to be shocked by her other brother.
Damn it's hard to hold a candle in the cold December rain I better back off this window and start thinking what would this window show me in another twenty tears from now.
Posted by GraY FoX at 2:34 PM
19 Comments
2 b honest
u scared the shit out'v me
OH MY DEAR GOD
I started reading and have that strange mexture of feeling
I'm dizzy ya zalmih
10/10 Iyado like always
how the hell do you link things together
well , I started reading and actually felt warmer till you looked back from the window . Why did you have to do this ?
Now , This is an order . Go back to the same window . See something nice . Come back and write about it cuz I'm freeziiiiiing!!
Nice imagery of looking at the world...I was taken there by the discription of the window best...
Hello my name is Amy
I stumbled into your blog and started reading by accident
And I think that you are a good writer
That look from the window has a philosophic and poignant style
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cheers and thanks
wonderful style !
but , could not you be more hopeful? it is strange how things change through time but things can change to better ..........sometimes .. ha?
Heya all of you fellows....
Anonymous ... sorry for scaring you
Lana Dear.... i'm a linker dear :D
Destiny the cute ... khalas i promise i'll go back to that window... not cuz you ordered.. cuz i want to :D .. i'm untamed :D
Dusty .... thanks for coming ... and thanks for your nice words...
Amy.. wow i'm really blushing .... come on i'm not that good ...
Mandy ... hey dear... long time no see.... miss ya girl ... hmmm it could've been warmer... but i wanted it colder :D
i told u this before may be, the way u start a story inorder to state an opinion is amazing..
sometimes we all wish we can stand at our windows and see life the way we like it..
but still life is not that bad ;)
WOW that was something else!...hope things will be better in twenty years from now...but Wallahi it doesn't look like it!...PEACE!...
Go back to your window and look down..can you see me mewing under it ???
hey all.....
thank you ghalloosh i appreicte your opinion dear :D .... and life is not bad .. in the eyes of a child...
Sharks the dearest. I hope things will be better in 20 years from now as well ... but since there are people like you things will be alright :D
Cute nk2 .. 3aw 3aw..... you always mew dear :D
Bravo! Bravo! Splendid piece, Gray!
Gray Fox, thanks for stopping by my blog... I like your writing... last post is real nice, very true in every land. I noticed the neat
guitar on the bottom of your page, perhaps a stratocaster, or telecaster? I used to be in music biz, now I'm too old to be in any biz. later dude.
thank You apples ... your professional opinion means much to me :$
Osary .... hello there... thanks for stopping by .... thanks for your consideration and nice words .... and guitar wise ... yes it's a telecaster .. i usd to be a geek in music biz once .. but not as a pro .. you know :D
thanks again guys
Hey Grayado (you can add this to your other nicknames). I add my voice to others complementing your writing. You have a unique descriptive style.
Happy new year to you and family.
Hey my pleasure! Here's wishing you a Joyous and Happy New Year, Gray!
lol ... i love my new nickname ;) Grayado :D ... I welcome being called Iyadox as well :)
thank you so much bassam your opinion really matters :D
Apples .... thank you so much wishing you the same and a bit more extra :D
First of all so cooooooooool
Guess what??
u can find Beauty in the ugliest places.......
No one is a saint...so no one is a demon.......
so try to look of the window one more time ,look for the beauty and be thankfull for Darkness cuz it taught us how beautiful world can be
hey hey hey sold out ... thanks for passing by ;) kifak 3abo ??
hmm i guess you are right ...
we made the beautiful sweet yummy cakes from different yucky tasteless contents ;)
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