I Fall
I was born there, where all feelings are born, where light comes in to enlighten the soul of who craves it, I was born where I'll never be back again.
I was born there and spent my life running down a hill, a curvy hill covered with white milky soft snow that I could taste, and spring pinkish blossoms that I could inhale.
I ran down and took a turn to the place where words are made of a mixture of a sweet tone and a scented breath, I ran down there to die and vanish and rest in peace-no-longer.
I was a shinning tear, I was born in your eyes, I spent my life running down your cheek, and I died on your lips.
Even though tears vanish, but their trace is always there, leaving a sweet stain on our souls, and a deep scar in our hearts, so I'll just die, but I'll never leave.
I'll just rest in your restless oblivion, and make sure that you will find your way.
I'll make friends with your guardian angels, and I'll let my light caress the walls of your darkest tunnels.
I'll be blowing candles, casting spells, hailing prays, and always long-living you within my heart.
I'll taste tears of angels when it rains, and remember how I was a tear, and how I fell, and I promise you that I will always fall.
D.Cavanagh |
Posted by GraY FoX at 8:36 PM
7 Comments
DEAR
WALLAH I FEEL FOR U
CALL ME IF THERE R 'NYTHING I CAN DO
DON'T HISTATE
A tear is never forgotten Iyad.. not the happy one , not the sad one...
"If you look closer it's easy to trace the tracks of my tears"
But Iyad ... Born an Angel , always an Angel.....
And the sweet Angel never falls ...
man, your words very nice, and express a good feeling, it felt that i was there with you.
by the way, every time I read :"I have born there," I remember a poem by Mahmoud Darwish, I would like to share some if with you.
I am from There:
I come from there and remember,
I was born like everyone is born, I have a mother
and a house with many windows,
I have brothers, friends and a prison.
I have a wave that sea-gullls snatched away.
I have a view of my own and an extra blade of grass.
I have a moon past the peak of words.
I have the godsent food of birds and an olive tree beyond the ken of time.
I have traversed the land before swords turned bodies into banquets.
I come from there. I return the sky to its mother when for its mother the
sky cries, and I weep for a returning cloud to know me.
I have learned the words of blood-stained courts in order to break the rules.
I have learned and dismantled all the words to construct a single one: Home
I am loving your blog, keep the good work brother.....
سلام
أبو عبسة
wleeee FAZEEE3AH...am getting chills all over!!! "as3ar badany ya3ni " :)
I want you to Be free of all the pain ya 3ammo iyad...
salam everyone and thank you so much for coming and for your amazing support
Anonymous , thanks :)
cute nk2, appreciate your support and your sweet words ;)
Abu 3beseh
dude , that was amazing , thanks for the great comment , and i really appreciate that you passed by :)
sharks el3abo :)
salamet badanek mnel as3ara :P , i'm already free of pain and brand new :D
First I had a quick reading …and I passed u my first impression online…wallahi amazing reminds me with this song http://www.blueyze.us/twoteardrops.html
Now…I m sitting quietly and trying to digest each word…and trace with ur words the tear journey through your life cycle.
U know..ur post is not like reading literature but I `d rather say…it is like the digital courses (AND OR NAND XOR)..I need my mind 100% up to read it…there is always some logic plays between syntax and semantics of each line and u don’t get any output till u run it all.
Simply, I like it :P
hello you the evil :)
i heard the song and it's quite nice , nice taste maam :)
i know my words are hard to digest, and sometimes they have a mixture of visualizations, pure emotions, and complicated metaphores, but still i'm trying to show the real me behind these words :)
logic comes into all , into literature , into feelings , into our lifecycle though,
we are all inputs and outputs to a huge system, we err , and we will someday go to a QA day :P
thank you for coming over anyways, hope i will always measure up to your standard :)
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